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elbereth
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 27, 2003 3:29 pm    Post subject: lyrics Reply with quote

hello...
here are some lyrics I´ve written on my own. I´m from germany so my english isn´t the best. Could you give me a feedback of the grammar or so... that would be very nice.

That´s like a new spring day begins
The sun will rise up high
And in the middle of the day
I could occur that your shouting out your joy
This might be a feeling of overjoyed
Or even the chains are fallin`

The snow will melt away
And the breathing feels like a fresh summer rain on your shoulders
But that´s just the consequence of listen
To the words passing through your heart

That´s just how it feels
If you let love coming through
You better put your heart up
So it can face the sun

Your rooms are quiet and homeless
But don´t let the cold in
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moonburger
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 2:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

lovely...just lovely...good job
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elbereth
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 2:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

oh thank you very much. it´s about my experience with a relationship to a girl and the time after this relationship. she was my girl friend for one year. i had sleepless nights because i didn´t know what to do. she is a very nice girl and i wanted to keep a normal friendship. and when all this chaos and disappointing fades it feels just like a summer rain on your shoulder. and listen to your heart is the way out of chaos... it´s the only thing you can do in that moment.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 10:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

once its over you never become friends again...very rare is this occurence....good luck
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elbereth
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 29, 2003 1:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

we are friends now and it´s a very, very good friendship.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 31, 2003 1:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

enjoy it...tis rare.........
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Scully82
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 9:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="elbereth"]Hallo...falls du das hier liest...komme ebenfalls aus der nähe bremens...........und auch ich habe nach über einem jahr meinen Freund verloren...........wir versuchen Freunde zu bleiben........aber das ist echt schwer! Ich fühle noch zum Teil und er hat eine Neue an seiner Seite.......aber wer weiß, viell. schaffen wir es irgrndwie........,das wäre verdammt schön...dir alles Gute...
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elbereth
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 4:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey scully. das klingt ja echt blöd. bei mir gehts grad wieder steil bergauf. mir gings nämlich genauso wie dir. irgendwann ist man halt wieder verliebt und will ne neue chance. bei uns ist einfach so viel falsch gelaufen, dass die beziehung irgendwann nur noch stress und enttäuschung wäre. mittlerweile, wo wir halt ne längere pause hatten, fühlt sich das alles halt wieder nach liebe an. das mit deinem freund tut mir echt leid, aber wenn er dich auch liebt, dann kann er gar nicht anders als wieder zurückkommen. ich hoffe das klappt irgendwie...

p.s. wo kommst du denn genau her?
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